I think you captured the feeling of this piece beautifully. On the one hand, the whiteness of the clouds and expanse of the sky creates a sense of optimism, but the dark foreground and streak of dark cloud before and below the main body of the cloud are somehow foreboding, for lack of a better word. My only critiques would be that the streak of dark cloud before the main body disrupts the picture slightly for me, but that might just be me. The only other thing is that after looking at this piece awhile, the highlight on the bridge became more obvious, and distracted me only very slightly from the main subject of the picture, but again, that could just be me. I'm nowhere near professional photography... Overall, a piece pleasing to the eye with a bittersweet feel of distant things. Have a lovely day!! ~L. C. S.
Great balance to this piece, in both color and line... I get the feeling I feel like you intended me to, and that goes a long way in photography. I like how manicured and clean everything looks in this... Even the clouds look like they are grudgingly obeying you, and I imagine they are struggling in revolt as torus is forming. Great job!