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January 30, 2010
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Canon PowerShot S5 IS
Shutter Speed
6199/495858 second
Focal Length
6 mm
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Date Taken
Oct 4, 2008, 3:45:50 PM
a hollow promise - BW edition by darkdex52 a hollow promise - BW edition by darkdex52
This photo looks a lot better in Black and White. It's an HDR photo btw. It's in Sigulda, Latvia
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Ok, I had to think about this for a while because when I first look at the image it is generally striking and interesting. I appreciate the subject in the first place because it speaks of a time long past and of much history that likely nobody will ever know...

Also I agree with your choice to move from color to BW, though I may also recommend you try one other style...This image may work very well in pseudo-hdr (if you have Photoshop then maybe try this tutorial for an excellent effect [link] ; if you don't have Photoshop then it is very possible you can use the principles of the tutorial in whatever editing application you are using.

Finally, it took me a while to be ready to write this critique because as much as I liked the image, I couldn't put my finger on what was bothering I think I got it...your angle and perspective are great, and while I may have taken 1 step left for the shot, that is personal style; so I think what is missing is depth-of-field...because everything is in focus, our eye tends to try and focus on EVERYTHING, so the wall on the right, as cool as it is, may need some blurring and/or darkening so as to allow the eye to naturally move down to the more ornate architecture in the distance...

It is a beautiful and interesting shot that hints at stories that will never be told; try adding a DOF effect down just 1/3 of the right wall and see if it doesn't relax your eyes into the depths of the image. :-) Also, if you try the pseudo-hdr effect, I sure would love to see it so please notify me!
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Critique by BlazestarofBurstclan Jan 16, 2012, 1:45:29 AM
Uh... This is my first Critique and I just finished a two week photography assignment... So I'm sorry if this fails.
And warning, I know nothing about photography (X3)

Vision: I can see it vvery clearly. You can tell it is old and there's some contrast. It's breathtaking.

Originality: It's not the first time I've seen a picture like this, but it's probably the best I've seen.

Technique: I'm impressed by what side you chose and how it's kinda slanted sideways. Like I said, some contrast and prosparity (DIDN'T SPELL IT RIGHT! DARN IT!). And I can kinda see a rule of thirds.
Impact: Whatever this means, Overall, it's an amazing photograph. It's beautiful, emotional and breathtaking. I hope I get to see more of these.

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The black and white look great and I see why you perfered it that wat rather than color.
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666Epitaph666 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014
Wow! Really love this one! 
Nesquik28 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  New member Student Artist
I like the detail as well as the way the photo was taken really great :)
Dianabolique Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Deep, Dark and totally stunning! I looove it!!! :love:
samanthesoteric Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  New member
This reminds me of Dark Souls. XD
kemalesmer Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014
nica capture.
Skyflick6 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  New member Hobbyist Digital Artist
This pic is so beautifully haunting - great job!!
jfc0000000 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
I never was able to take a decent photo. Yours are amazing. Don't know how u do it.
ReinTigr Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Is you photographed?
robertcicheckiart Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Great photo.   *
DoubleDandE Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Great shot, I like how it leaves the entire photo ominous. 
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